Why still does my heart yourself fear ?
You're the teacher who righted wrong
You're the poetry I wrote, You're a song
Sadness you show whence I need taught
About what I need earn and whats bought
Your visits made my home lone, light dear
Why ? still do you mine heart, him so fear
Sadness You're the fire, I melt dust to gold
Yours are the epics deep, if remains untold
You are the darkness that made light clear
Why ! still this heart, him doth fear..........
Dude its quite gud. Brilliant actually.
ReplyDeleteI dont know the context of the reference but,
A small suggestion is, replace sadness with failure. Sadness may come in many forms, most of which relate to a loss in life which we rightfully fear.
Failure is the greatest teacher.
Over which we can win with resilience.
yeah....well said pv
DeleteYou been nominated to the Liebster award. Bwahahahahaha :D
ReplyDeletehttp://adityasanyal.blogspot.in/2013/07/i-got-liebster-award.html